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句子控制与修辞修改

关于设备的草稿

Draft: The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools. The current notebook lists a borrower’s name but not a return time. Last Tuesday, two members searched for a camera while it was at a supervised activity. Because no return time was recorded. A board could show who has an item and when it is expected back. The board would make everything efficient and solve all our problems. Members should enter a name, stating a return time, and check the item on return. “It” may be seen by visitors, so private contact information should not be displayed. The proposal needs one person to check the board at closing.

示例：“The team checked the claim, it lacked evidence”仅用逗号连接两个独立分句；改为“The team checked the claim and found that it lacked evidence”明确关系。根据材料完成各项任务，按要求作答。

1.解释“The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools.”的句子边界问题并修改。 Explain the sentence-boundary problem in “The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools.” and revise it.

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句子控制与修辞修改

练习 · 独立完成 · 50 分钟

诊断句子边界和不完整从句。修改平行结构、指代及缺乏支持的确定性。为衔接和读者重写，保留原文事实。包含探索、练习和应用的完整练习。可查看对应学习单元的活动顺序和教学指南。

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句子控制与修辞修改：探索与讲解

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Draft: The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools. The current notebook lists a borrower’s name but not a return time. Last Tuesday, two members searched for a camera while it was at a supervised activity. Because no return time was recorded. A board could show who has an item and when it is expected back. The board would make everything efficient and solve all our problems. Members should enter a name, stating a return time, and check the item on return. “It” may be seen by visitors, so private contact information should not be displayed. The proposal needs one person to check the board at closing.

示例：“The team checked the claim, it lacked evidence”仅用逗号连接两个独立分句；改为“The team checked the claim and found that it lacked evidence”明确关系。阅读或观察材料，在适当帮助下说明你的推理。

1.解释“The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools.”的句子边界问题并修改。 Explain the sentence-boundary problem in “The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools.” and revise it.

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句子控制与修辞修改：探索与讲解

探索 · 独立完成 · 15 分钟

诊断句子边界和不完整从句。修改平行结构、指代及缺乏支持的确定性。为衔接和读者重写，保留原文事实。针对探索与讲解的练习。可查看对应学习单元的活动顺序和教学指南。

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句子控制与修辞修改：独立练习

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Draft: The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools. The current notebook lists a borrower’s name but not a return time. Last Tuesday, two members searched for a camera while it was at a supervised activity. Because no return time was recorded. A board could show who has an item and when it is expected back. The board would make everything efficient and solve all our problems. Members should enter a name, stating a return time, and check the item on return. “It” may be seen by visitors, so private contact information should not be displayed. The proposal needs one person to check the board at closing.

根据材料完成各项任务，按要求作答。

1.修改“Members should enter a name, stating a return time, and check the item on return.”使结构平行，指出对应形式。 Revise “Members should enter a name, stating a return time, and check the item on return.” for parallel structure. Identify the matching forms.

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句子控制与修辞修改：独立练习

练习 · 独立完成 · 25 分钟

诊断句子边界和不完整从句。修改平行结构、指代及缺乏支持的确定性。为衔接和读者重写，保留原文事实。针对独立练习的练习。可查看对应学习单元的活动顺序和教学指南。

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句子控制与修辞修改：应用与创作

关于设备的草稿

Draft: The club should record equipment loans, it will help members find tools. The current notebook lists a borrower’s name but not a return time. Last Tuesday, two members searched for a camera while it was at a supervised activity. Because no return time was recorded. A board could show who has an item and when it is expected back. The board would make everything efficient and solve all our problems. Members should enter a name, stating a return time, and check the item on return. “It” may be seen by visitors, so private contact information should not be displayed. The proposal needs one person to check the board at closing.

运用所学知识进行解释、创作或应用。

1.将草稿改为两个连贯段：目的与支持、条件与评估；修正语法，不添加虚构证据。 Rewrite the draft as two coherent paragraphs: purpose and support, then conditions and evaluation. Fix the targeted grammar without adding invented evidence.

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句子控制与修辞修改：应用与创作

应用 · 独立完成 · 30 分钟

诊断句子边界和不完整从句。修改平行结构、指代及缺乏支持的确定性。为衔接和读者重写，保留原文事实。针对应用与创作的练习。可查看对应学习单元的活动顺序和教学指南。

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句子控制与修辞修改

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句子控制与修辞修改：探索与讲解

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句子控制与修辞修改：独立练习

关于设备的草稿

句子控制与修辞修改：应用与创作

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句子控制与修辞修改

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句子控制与修辞修改

句子控制与修辞修改：探索与讲解

句子控制与修辞修改：独立练习

句子控制与修辞修改：应用与创作

教学与作答指南

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在以下位置查找此活动：英语语言与读写图谱