叙事结构与批评视角：探索与讲解练习单 · 十二年级

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At the station, Lena flattened a receipt she had folded into quarters. The timetable above the desk showed the train leaving in nine minutes. She told herself that she was checking the destination, not delaying the journey. Yesterday the same piece of paper had lain under a cup in her father’s kitchen. He had asked whether the interview would take her away for good. She had explained the train route instead of answering. He drew a circle around the return fare and left the pen uncapped.

Now a clerk asked whether she needed a return ticket. Lena almost said that somebody was waiting for her, though her father had made no promise to come to the station. People changed their plans; it was sensible to leave a space in the timetable. She watched the clerk turn the screen. “An open return,” Lena said. The clerk named a higher price. Lena counted the extra coins twice before handing them over. She could have spent them on lunch near the interview building.

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At the station, Lena flattened a receipt she had folded into quarters. The timetable above the desk showed the train leaving in nine minutes. She told herself that she was checking the destination, not delaying the journey. Yesterday the same piece of paper had lain under a cup in her father’s kitchen. He had asked whether the interview would take her away for good. She had explained the train route instead of answering. He drew a circle around the return fare and left the pen uncapped.

Now a clerk asked whether she needed a return ticket. Lena almost said that somebody was waiting for her, though her father had made no promise to come to the station. People changed their plans; it was sensible to leave a space in the timetable. She watched the clerk turn the screen. “An open return,” Lena said. The clerk named a higher price. Lena counted the extra coins twice before handing them over. She could have spent them on lunch near the interview building.

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At the station, Lena flattened a receipt she had folded into quarters. The timetable above the desk showed the train leaving in nine minutes. She told herself that she was checking the destination, not delaying the journey. Yesterday the same piece of paper had lain under a cup in her father’s kitchen. He had asked whether the interview would take her away for good. She had explained the train route instead of answering. He drew a circle around the return fare and left the pen uncapped.

Now a clerk asked whether she needed a return ticket. Lena almost said that somebody was waiting for her, though her father had made no promise to come to the station. People changed their plans; it was sensible to leave a space in the timetable. She watched the clerk turn the screen. “An open return,” Lena said. The clerk named a higher price. Lena counted the extra coins twice before handing them over. She could have spent them on lunch near the interview building.